Thursday, June 29, 2006

Escape

Just wanted to double check with my few readers: y'know, if something sucks, you can tell me, right? It won't bother me any, I think it ALL sucks, so you won't be telling me anything new! ;) Anyway, got a new one for ya...

Escape

How can I escape you for good
When you've thrown me into this pit
Knowing my wings were clipped
So you didn't even give me a chain
I'm eternally your trapped songbird

Your embrace is suffocating me
I cry out for God
Or whoever will answer me
But they can't even hear me
Let alone help me

The only control I can find here
Is in the little cuts to you and me
To remind us that I was once in charge
But even that pales compared
To the cut of your careless words

3 comments:

Jude said...

Okay it's good, but it doesn't have that Sketchized wording/phrasing that you get so fancy with.... so to me it seems lacking but that's probably just because I have gotten to addicted to how you usually write. Maybe?

Jude said...

Well I sure hope that didn't sound too bad!! I meant that it is good but not what your standards of wordplay usually are Sketch.

You have more talent in your pinky finger than I'll ever see in my lifetime. Keep at it hon, I love your work!

DrSketch said...

Nah, you're right, I didn't quite have it when I wrote this one... Wasn't really feeling it!