Just wanted to double check with my few readers: y'know, if something sucks, you can tell me, right? It won't bother me any, I think it ALL sucks, so you won't be telling me anything new! ;) Anyway, got a new one for ya...
Escape
How can I escape you for good
When you've thrown me into this pit
Knowing my wings were clipped
So you didn't even give me a chain
I'm eternally your trapped songbird
Your embrace is suffocating me
I cry out for God
Or whoever will answer me
But they can't even hear me
Let alone help me
The only control I can find here
Is in the little cuts to you and me
To remind us that I was once in charge
But even that pales compared
To the cut of your careless words
About Me
- DrSketch
- If you've never heard of me before, how did you find your way here? Nevermind, doesn't matter. Everyone calls me Dr Sketch, and I write poetry. Some of it's happy, some of it's sad, not all of it is good, but I try to only put up the best of it on here. I'm not very "regular" about updating, but try to get one or two updates a week done...
3 comments:
Okay it's good, but it doesn't have that Sketchized wording/phrasing that you get so fancy with.... so to me it seems lacking but that's probably just because I have gotten to addicted to how you usually write. Maybe?
Well I sure hope that didn't sound too bad!! I meant that it is good but not what your standards of wordplay usually are Sketch.
You have more talent in your pinky finger than I'll ever see in my lifetime. Keep at it hon, I love your work!
Nah, you're right, I didn't quite have it when I wrote this one... Wasn't really feeling it!
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